Score: 6

"Nah not that good"

submission: ~SNAIL~

date: March 29, 2008

I liked the animation,and the what was supposed to be the beginning.
It would lead to a great storyline,and whatever if you made it longer.
But yes,It DOES have to be long.
For example,You make some uber 2 second short and it gets a 4.60.
WTF!?2 seconds for that high of a score?
So really,yes you do.
Make it longer next time.
And then it would be way better.

Score: 6

"You did pretty good!"

submission: Madness 3D trailer (OLD)

date: March 29, 2008

I like how you used the lighting feature.
You should use shadows too though.

Well,I didnt like the animation though.
His hands were completely still,so was his head too.
Then came the feet,which didnt move as good.
Just improve on that and you get the whole scene improved.

Also,the animation was fluent,But the character did simple kills.
For example,It doesnt take an opponent 5 seconds to try and fight back.

But overall,this is a great start.
I hope you do better next time.
So good luck!

Score: 9

"Wasn't perfect,BUT GREAT!"

submission: Gimgak's Piano sim. v1.0

date: March 28, 2008

This was a great accomplishment!
And I look forward to more.
I liked how you input the coding for sound.
What you might want to do,
Is improve on the buttons.
Like using an Over command,making it a different colour,
and an Down command,making it look like it is being pressed.
And maybe some graphics.

But this was very nice.
I look forward to more.
I liked this a lot!

Score: 6

"Pretty nice,but much room for improvement."

submission: Pet dolphin

date: March 25, 2008

Now,there are some bad things I gotta tell you.
This might be version 1,but here are some suggestions!
-graphics,You can use lighting effects,But still,you did pretty good as a start!

-graphic acessories,Well,How about some things to decorate?
For example,a graphic symbol that are bubbles,that might appear.
You could code this game,so you could definately code that :)

-Text graphic,You gotta make it a little more stable,and try to make sure not to miss any spelling errors.

-more of what you made,I know you are gonna do this,but meh just a reminder.Like more tricks and stuff.

But I did like some thing about it.
The dolphin was pretty cute,And the tricks were kinda fluent.
And I like the idea,and what this is about.
This may have JUST passed over the limit,But still.
If you improve on what you can,And work a little harder.
This will get a great score.
Great luck! :D

Score: 8

"Great game!"

submission: [GWC]~garbagewhistle game

date: March 18, 2008

Well it was just great!
The garbage whistle actually went on angles and stuff when it moved.
And also,I found it kinda funny.
And that preloader was just uber pwnage.
The music was nice too.
What you could improve on this,
is to make it a bit longer.
like levels :).
and also,for Tom,you can put some little running stick legs to make it better.
or include other admins instead!
But that was very nice.
Great game.

Score: 9

"Great!"

submission: sk8motion

date: March 16, 2008

This was a great flash,Nice job!
It was very fluent,kinda humerous,and interesting.
It was just great,all you need is to make it longer next time.
but that was great!

Score: 8

"Entertaining!"

submission: MouseMania DEMO

date: March 15, 2008

This itself,is entertaining,and passworthy.
I liked its graphics and idea alot.
But you could maybe make a menu.
add sounds,add modes,and some customs(like colour).
You know,what any game like this could use.
but this is a great game!

Score: 5

"Well,it was a nice short."

submission: Balloon Creature

date: March 15, 2008

Lol,This actually was kinda good for a pass as a 5-10 second "flash".
though it was short,and definately had not as much effort in to it,
What can I say?
It was nice.
You found a nice,fitting,and revalent piece of music to put into it!
then I liked the cloud's transparency.
Also the balloon creature was kinda cute to me. :)

What you can work on,is a more detailed end.
like the shot that actually fires at the balloon having a graphic effect.
Or some shadow put into the balloon.

But that was pretty nice.

Score: 9

"Well,Its great!"

submission: Stars 0.1

date: March 14, 2008

Normally,its just this kind of old idea.
In just a different theme.
WHICH IS WHAT THIS IS.
although,the thing is.
the star you play as is animated.
Also,when you said improving graphics,I didnt really expect to see what I saw.
These are probably the best graphics I've seen for these types of games.
Although you could work on the menus of course lol.
And since you will add sound and music next time,and an ending seen,
I really look forward to seeing the next one.=]

Score: 7

"Pretty good"

submission: Blob People Scene Creator

date: March 9, 2008

I admit this is pretty good.
It had some catches like blood and stuff.
and the many characters.
also the items.
What you might consider doing it
-animated stuff
-bigger screen,smaller objects,you might not be able to fit everything
-a bigger variaty,most are just a small object change.
other than that,this was great!